hey guys - i need feedback on this poem. is it funny? does it make any sense? be honest, i won't be hurt. i am iron. :)

Anatomy of a Loss

Help me find -
my ears, where are my ears?
Oh, here. I was sitting on them.
My teeth? Maybe...
over there, in the planter?
Yes. My arms are
on the bookshelf
and my nose is there
on the floor. Thank you.
My stomach fell
somewhere - check under the desk.
No, my eyes
were closed, so
they're still right here.
And so is my heart, but it broke.
I'm sorry, I guess

after he left
I just fell apart.

c. 2004